some people think that to be successful you need to get University education whereas others say it is not true. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The table above
represnts
take the place of or be parallel or equivalent to
represents
proportion
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the proportion
of different categories of families living in
poverty
in Australia in 1999. They
given
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are given
have given
gave
different family types and their proportion of the people living in the
poverty
. There are different categories like single aged
,
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,
couple
aged, single with no children and
couple
with no children etc.., above all solo parents are tops in percentage with 21% of them are living in property, but numbers there are 232,000 people living
poverty
by 1990. When it comes to couples with children they are high in numbers living in
property
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a property
the property
with 933,000, but in percentage they bit less with 12%. It clearly shows the
couple
with children are high in numbers and within
poverty
are very less. It is just because of the care couples take for their children and for their family. It
make
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makes
family secure and
finacially
from a financial point of view
financially
strong.
Intrestingly we
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Interestingly, we
Interestingly we
can see
percentage
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the percentage
and number of
couple
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couples
with no children are very less in
poverty
with 12% following 211,000 in numbers.
This
shows a clear view that
couple
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couples
the couple
without family are financially strong because of less expenditures.
Finally we
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Finally, we
can aged
couple
are the richest community in 1990 in Australia. There are only 4% of couples in
poverty
, when it comes to the numbers they are only 48,000 which shows aged life is very secure and strong in Australia in 1990. I believe that
Australian government
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the Australian government
and society are the reasons for strong support
to
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for
aged
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the aged couple
couple
in Australia.

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