The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007.
The
barchart
provides information about the changes in the highest number of Asian elephants in 1997 and 2004 between 1994-2007.
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Overall
Asian elephant
in 1999 and 2004 shows some fluctuations.
Vietnam elephants show about 1200 in 1997 but later reduced to 1000 at the end
of the period.
Indian elepahant
rose drastically to about 10000 in 1997 later dropped and became steady in Correct your spelling
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elephants
Malasia
Srilanka to 3000 in 1997
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Malaysia
However
it showed a gradual decrease in Cambodia and Laos. Later increase to about 5300 in 1997 and continued to reduce steadily in Add a comma
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Myamma
, Thailand and China in 1997 reaching around 3000 in Correct your spelling
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Malasia
and Srilanka and hitting a low point in China in 1997.
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Malaysia
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of Vietnam Change the article
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The number
elephant
in 2004 was about 1100 and Indian Fix the agreement mistake
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elephant
got increased to about 7300 in 2004.
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the number of Malasia
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elephant
became steady in 2004, later Fix the agreement mistake
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Camdian
decrease to about 1200 and Laos Correct your spelling
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elephant
to about 1100 Myanma Fix the agreement mistake
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to about 5300 in 2004 and decrease Fix the agreement mistake
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steady
in Change the adjective
steadily
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and chinaCorrect your spelling
Thailand
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