1. Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

The importance of language existence is debatable. Some claims that lesser dialect around the globe would be better.
This
essay will argue why every language needs to be preserved, as it plays an important role in person's life. Language is a huge part of our history, which means that in order to fully understand the origin of a populace, their dialect must
also
be learned by heart.
In addition
, when we try to adapt on their culture and practices, their mother tongue must
also
be part of it.
Furthermore
, it is very evident that every part of the world speaks different kind languages, which is very fascinating because through their way of speaking, we can already conclude where they came from.
For example
, there was a documentation which
was aired
Suggestion
aired
on national television about a certain tribe who doesn't have any idea where they originated
,
Accept space
,
but because of the dialect they speak, the experts were able to trace their origin.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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