Many students are choosing not to study science in universities.what are the causes for that.what are the effects on the society

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science
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and the foremost of all the contributing factors is the tremendous effort and time
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these subjects demand for studying.
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scholars of these subjects burn their elbow grease to cope up with their studies.
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Making
things worse is that their timeless efforts don't pay off well as the jobs they might get are not economically beneficial.
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an
art student earns
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a lot more
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science
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the unattractive salary package for
science
related jobs and endless tiring study schedule keeps the students away from choosing
science
for their career options. The negative impact resulting from
this
tendancy
an attitude of mind especially one that favors one alternative over others
tendency
of disinterest towards
science
would be insurmountable.
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as less students pass out learning
science
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of
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which will hinder the development of newer inventions.
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increasing numbers
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nowadays educational institutions
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witnessed
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pupils
taking up
science
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unemployment and hindered technological advancement.

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