The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck county at different times of the year.
The table interprets the data of varieties of
birds
species in Woodchuck region at different periods.
There are some birds
, which are active not only during summer
, but also
winter
period, such
as: Cardinals, Crows and Woodpeckers. However
, The prevailing fowls are found energetic only during one season, either summer
or winter
. The only bird which caught merely in winter
is Juncos; the only exotic winter
bird in Woodchuck district.
The remainders of the group, such
as: Bluebirds, Mockingbirds; Orioles, and Vireos, need a dry and warm habitat. Therefore
, these fowls are merely found in summer
. This
characteristic is not a special ability among the birds
species in the aforementioned area.
To conclude
, Every birds
has its own favorable habitat condition. The prevailing of fowls are active during summer
period. However
, the observation shows the opposing data for the one which is vibrant only in winter
, and the others can be found lively during both condition.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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