IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 3

What are the merits and demerits of globalisation on Developing nations?

#merits #demerits #globalisation #nations
My schedule was so hectic that I hardly could find
sometime
Suggestion
some time
 to sit and write down
to
Suggestion
for
 you. Hope you are doing great.
Finally
, I am writing
this
 letter to say, how sorry I am for forgetting to pay you back.
First
 of all, I apologize that it just skipped my mind to pay you back that I
lended
having come or been brought to a conclusion
ended
last
 month, promising you to return in a week. As you know, I needed that money for the down payment of the loan as I urgently needed a car for my office commute in
this
 bad weather.
However
, to my dismay, after getting the car, there was no day in peace as it got
lot
Suggestion
lots
 of troubles in its machine.
Additionally
, the service centre was pathetic and kept me on toes till it was resolved. With all these
hardship
Suggestion
hardships
, the forgetful me forgot about the
lended
bestow a quality on
lent
landed
lender
 money.
Finally
, I have done NEFT to your account and by
this
 time you might have received it in your account.
Furthermore
, you will soon receive a
zoomland
 ticket for you and your spouse tomorrow. Consider it as my penalty for keeping your money for so long. I can’t thank you enough for coping up with me. See you soon. Take care.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: