MORE AND MORE QUALIFIED PEOPLE ARE MOVING FROM POOR TO RICH COUNTRIES TO FILL VACCANICES IN SPECIALIST AREAS LIKE ENGINEERING, COMPUTING AND MEDCINE. SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT BY ENCOURAGING THE MOVEMENT OF SUCH PEOPLE, RICH COUNTRIES ARE STEELING FROM POOR COUNTRIES. OTHERS FEEL THAT THIS IS ONLY PART OF THE NATURAL MOVEMENT OF WORKERS AROUND THE WORLD.

Now a
days
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day
, highly skilled people are travelling to
developed
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developing
countries due to excessive
job
opportunities offered by them. A group of people
are
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is
of the opinion that the migration towards countries having
strong economy
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a strong economy
leads to scarcity of skilled people in developing countries.
On the other hand
, people consider it as a part of routine work. In
this
essay, I would be discussing both the views in detail. In
under developed
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
underdeveloped
countries, it has become a growing trend to
move
to a developed
country
, due to lack of
job
opportunities.
This
means, the
country
gets deprived of its highly talented people.
Furthermore
, the expertise of the skilled individual
are utilized
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is utilized
by the developed
country
.
For example
, a person having an excellent educational background and possessing skills related to a specific field, created a void in that field while migrating.
In addition
, tempting
job
opportunities are offered by these
countries forcing
Accept comma addition
countries, forcing
an individual to
move
to a
country
.
On the other hand
, people migrate towards a better
country
for a better living. As in developing countries, the state
does not provides
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does not provide
any benefits and supports any individual, it is considered natural to
move
to another
country
for better opportunities.
For instance
, a graduated individual unable to get a good
job
gets frustrated and works hard to
move
to a
developed
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developing
country
for a better living. In conclusion, people are migrating to developed countries for having a quality life. People seek for
good
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better
opportunities offered by rich countries.
Under developed
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Underdeveloped
countries should make
rules
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the rules
and regulate movement of people to other countries, to avoid any scarcity of individuals affecting their own economy.

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