Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Television
in
present has become part of our lifestyle, with everyone from age old to kids watching it to see channels of their interest. Having Suggestion
at
plethora
of channels Suggestion
a plethora
give
everyone Suggestion
gives
vide
array of options from Entertainment, Music, Movies, NEWS, Health, Sports, Knowledge, Religious, etc.., which ensure no one left behind untouched. In having great (or a certain) extent from one side to the other
wide
this
topic, where we are discussing if Television replace the book as learning tool
, because of which children are Suggestion
a learning tool
learning tools
less well
- educated today, I share both positive and negatives of Suggestion
less good
this
electronic mean, supporting my acceptance that Television cannot replace Book, but equally not supporting that children are less educated today because of it.
Television was introduced as visual mean
of entertaining and updating people with current affairs. Suggestion
a visual mean
visual means
However
, in modern time
, it brought Suggestion
times
bouquet
of services including Channels, Interactive applications, etc. Suggestion
a bouquet
with
no restriction on Suggestion
With
content
. My support for Text books
as non-replacement is for the reason that text books, call concentration of Suggestion
Textbooks
reader
and help him align his mind to Suggestion
readers
the reader
subject
he is reading. Learning only through television doesn’t bring that physical bonding with Suggestion
a subject
the subject
subject
as we get with books in hand and many times, learner deviate from his actual subject
and loses concentration.
In contrast
, I do not support belief that children these days are less-educated compare
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compared
to earlier time
. Education is not just reading what is written, published or taught in school. Education is Suggestion
to an earlier time
overall development
of Suggestion
the overall development
child
. Television as learning mean helps student to visualise Suggestion
the child
children
a child
content
he is reading or has read and give him near practical feel of Suggestion
the content
event
, giving him Suggestion
the event
better understanding
of Suggestion
a better understanding
subject
. Suggestion
the subject
a subject
Also
, with wide array
of information and multiple informative Suggestion
a wide array
content
on channels available, kid can get opportunity
to learn global information, much more than his existing circle. Suggestion
the opportunity
an opportunity
This
help
young kid to create interest in new field unknown to existing piers.
Every technology comes with positive and negatives and it is on us how we use that technology. We can use Nuclear to create war and same to treat human kind. Suggestion
helps
Similarly
, we can use Television as supportive mean of education without replacing Books, but equally must not blame this
technology for its negatives, if we deviate from subject
to other entertainment content
. I will compile this
subject
supporting books as primary mode
of knowledge with Television as supportive, without blaming any for measuring level of education.Suggestion
the primary mode
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