You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened, and that you want your money back. Things to include: – Facts. You need to be concise but explain what happened. – Polite. No one responds to insults. – Outline what you wish from this. What do you want to happen? – Firmness. You want to be taken seriously.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to
compliant
an often persistent bodily disorder or disease; a cause for complaining
complaint
about the food which
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
consumed
last
weekend on 01st March, in your
resturant
a building where people go to eat
restaurant
restaurants
situated in the City Centre Mall, I came along with my family to dine in your
hotel
and I was shocked
with
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by
your staff
behviour
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
. Let me explain in detail. I already had a confirmed reservation and
bourght
obtain by purchase; acquire by means of a financial transaction
bought
my close relative along with my own family to celebrate my promotion I received at my company. After reaching your premises I requested
receiption
the manner in which something is greeted
reception
man
to take
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take
me to my table.
Instead
of checking about my confirm booking, your staff
repplied
react verbally
replied
rudly
in an impolite manner
rudely
stating there is no reservation in my name. Even I went to your
hotel
manager they were of no help. My entire
celebration
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celebratory
mood was completely spoiled by your
hotel
team attitude. It was too
embarassing
hard to deal with; especially causing pain or embarrassment
embarrassing
in front of my family members. I wish to report
about
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on
this
incident to
resturant
a building where people go to eat
restaurant
association and
also
report in
local newspaper
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the local newspaper
a local newspaper
with complete turmoil I had to face in the
resturant
a building where people go to eat
restaurant
restaurants
. I want
top managament
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the top management
top management
from
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of
hotel
chain should
appoligies
defend, explain, clear away, or make excuses for by reasoning
apologise
apologize
apologies
for the behaviour and
also
terminate
incooperative
unwilling to cooperate
uncooperative
in cooperative
staff as it is not only bringing bad name to the
hotel
but
also
to
entire place
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the entire place
. I appreciate, Your entire management can check the video recording of the day and take
stringint
demanding strict attention to rules and procedures
stringent
astringent
action. Thanking you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Mohammed Abdul Wahab.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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