The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999. Summarise it.

The pie chart illustrates figures (sayı) for visitors to four categories of tourist attraction and to five different
parks in Britain in 1999. It is clear that
parks and museums/galleries were the tow most popular types of attraction in that year. Blackpool Pleasure Beach received by far the highest proportion of visitors in the
sector. Looking at the
information more detail
information in more detail
, we can see that 38% of the surveyed visitors went to a
, and 37% of them went to a museum or gallery.
By contrast
, historic
a dwelling that serves as living quarters for one or more families
and monuments were visited by only 16% of the sample, while wildlife parks and zoos were the least popular of the four types of tourist
the force by which one object attracts another
, with only 9% of all visitors. In the
sector, almost half of the people surveyed (47%) had been to Blackpool Pleasure Beach. Alton Towers was the
most popular amusement
expresses the means used
17% of the sample, followed by Pleasureland in Southport with 16%. Finallyi Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland Windsor had each welcomed 10% of the surveyed visitors

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