The chart below show the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between the 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below show the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between the 1918 and 2011.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
This
bar chart illustrates information about the
amount
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of houses, which were owned and for rent in the United Kingdom between the year 1918 till 2011.
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, it can be seen that households
in
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owning accommodations, experienced an upward trend,
while
households in rented accommodations showed a downward trend in their numbers. In 1918, the
owned
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had a percentage of 22, which was approximately 60
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lower than the
rent
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houses. From here, it rose up to 31
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and remained the same till 1953. In the upcoming years, it showed a steady increase and reached
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a peak of nearly 70
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. In the final year, it dropped down to 65%. The rent,
accommodations
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and accommodations
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started
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merely 80% in the first year. In 1939, it declined to 69
percent
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and remained
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same amount till 1953. It showed a drop during the rest of the period. In 1972, it came down to a similar percentage as the owned houses, with a percentage of 50
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. In 2011, it experienced a number of 35%, which was 30% less than the other category.
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