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Writing Samples
Band 5

Write a letter to a friend. In your letter Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves Say why you think the job would be suitable for hime Explain how to apply for the job

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Dear Navjot, I am writing to letting you know that
i
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 heard about
an
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job
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 opportunity from my cousin because he works in the
company
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who
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that
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 is offering
this
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job
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. As
i
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 told
by
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apply
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my cousin
this
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 is a technical
job
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 in
welding
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the welding
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 field and the
company
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 is looking for a candidate who is strong physically and mentally
both
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apply
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.
This
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job
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 includes operating a welding machine . I know you are looking for any type of
job
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 due to finical problems. You are
hardworking
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, honest person and strong too.
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,
this
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 is a skilled
job
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 and has many opportunities for growth in future. If you are interested, you can apply through the
company
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 online website which is abc.com.
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, you can go to the
company
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 and talk to
the
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apply
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HR
in-person
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in person
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. Well, in the
end
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i
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I
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 will eagerly wait for your response. Best Regards, Prince Preet

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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