Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are split opinions regarding
this
topic stop in that context coma some people believe that economic progress is the main
goal whereas
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goal, whereas
the other group of believers think that another kind of progress is
also
significant as economic growth. How
were both has
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had both
were both has
its own pros and cons.
Therefore
comma before commenting on my decision, both the opinion would be discussed. Examine the former opinion the primary argument the supporters would put forward is the investment of foreign companies in that
country
full stop as it is seen that multinational companies show their interest in those countries which are strong economically because there is always a chance that
company
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the company
also
perform well in that region.
Moreover
, these companies may provide jobs for the indigenous people of the
country
.
On the contrary
, the relative you suggest that investing money on infrastructure and improvement in the education sector has the same importance. As, due to the increasing
population government
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population, government
should pay more attention to word building more new houses for them
furthermore
, fixing the old building and roads should be the main concern
for
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of
government
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the government
, as in natural calamities it may collapse all staff talking about the education sector, most of the rural children left uneducated due to non-availability of schools in their region a government should lay more implies on it. To conclude and give my opinion, I would say that
economically strong
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an economically strong
of a
country
is a good
thing but
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thing, but
in a big picture, we should not have to neglect the other parts of growth in a
country
.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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