You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened . Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.

Dear Mister or Madam, I am writing to enquire about the status of my suitcase, because it already happened one week and my luggage is not in my hands. Let me explain the situation again. I travelled by plane from Las Vegas to Philadelphia in May 21, which flight was delayed almost 4 hours. So, when I arrive
to
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Pennsylvania, I realized that my luggage is not available, a situation that was so annoying. In the office in the airport, one employee of your company told me that my suitcase would be the
next
day in my house and your airline would pay me 50 dollars for day of delay.
However
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However, this
this
did not happen. Would you kindly ask you to look for my suitcase, it is pink and is one
samsonite
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Samsonite
.
Also
, I want to know how you
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will be paid
the money that your company promise me. I will look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Your f
English writer whose novel about a lesbian relationship was banned in Britain for many years (1883-1943)
Hall
aithfully, Romina Huaiquil

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