Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip

My name is Ramani Ramakrishnan and mother of Aadhi who is studying
third
grade in your school. I am writing
this
letter to express my interest
on
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in
the three
days
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day
school trip. I
would to join
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would join
with you on
this
trip because of my son's sickness. He had an injury on his leg two months ago and had
minor operation
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a minor operation
. For
this
reason, he needs someone's help to take care of him. And
also
I have worked as child care taker for three years. In
this
way, I can help you
with
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by
taking care of all the children in every possible
ways
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way
such
as ensure children's playtime, organize mealtimes, supervise children's activities and monitor their safety. I have a question about
this
trip. As a parent, do I need to have any specific skills? Please get back to me as early as possible. It
help
Suggestion
helps
me to get ready. Looking forward to hear from you. Thank you.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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