write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staffs. how you feel about it what you heard about inconvenience from staffs what suggestion you can give

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to inform you about the inconvenience our staffs are facing due to lack of cafeteria service in our company premises. As we all know,our company is one of the leading companies in the field of marketing with elegant and fully co-operative and hardworking staffs. But they find it difficult at times to move on with their daily chores because of long working hours. It would be better for them to have

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an intermittent break where they can relax and have some snacks and chit chat with their colleagues. Even I feel the same as our job can be tiring after some time, it is necessary to have a relaxed mind. I would strongly recommend a snack bar and a cafeteria in our

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recreational area which can

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15 -20 people at a time.

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, we need eligible staff for canteen as well who are expert in coffee and tea making. Hope you will consider the situation and do the needful. Thanking you, Neil Nitin Mukesh.

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write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staffs. how you feel about it what you heard about inconvenience from staffs what suggestion you can give

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In some countries, school violence is becoming too common. What are some possible causes of this trend and solutions to it?

the exposure of international media such as films tv and magazines has impacts on local culture. what do you think of the impacts have been? Do you agree the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education with a range of subjects. In others, a narrow range of specific subjects is taught to focus students on their future careers. Which system is more suitable for today's world?

Some people believe that elderly employees are more useful to a company, while others believe that young employees are better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Describe some of the problems over reliance on cars can cause and suggest a possible solution.