Some people fail in school but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is most important thing to succeed in life?

It is often observed that there are some people being successful in life despite their failure in primary or secondary education.
is because of
old method
the old method
an old method
old methods
of teaching and memorizing the subject. In order to flourish in their life’s, they must work hard to achieve their goals.
To begin
with, most of the training institute
the old-fashionable teaching methods and the textbook set. Because of
the populace will get bored of learning those courses which
make them to fail in their studies.
, it will not decide the student’s ability as they might be good at other activities
as singing, dancing or painting and so on.
For example
, in India, a famous cricket player Sachin
Tendulkar who
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Tendulkar, who
is a school dropout, but he succeeds in cricket and everyone in the cricket world took him as a role model.
, learning the syllabus alone will not help people to be a successful
, but
existing as an essential constituent or characteristic
talent will make them to achieve their dreams. Admittedly, to be an outstanding
in their future, hard work and determination is the key factor.
In other words
, they must decide and plan for their work and put extra effort to fulfil their ambitions.
In addition
, they must take
and rely on a little luck.
For instance
, successful
like Bill Gates is a dropped from his school and become successful in developing the software.
, the continuous efforts make them to actualize their dreams and become influential people in the world. In conclusion, academic grade will not prove the success of each
in the future,
conscious mind and perseverance are very essential to be triumphant in life.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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