"Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, it is thought that to be more effective in improving the Nation

health

, to prevent the diseases rather than treat them. Cutting out from the treatment accounts to increase the budget

that is

spent on teaching about infection control and

health

precautions. In my own opinion, I believe in

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phrase which say “prevention is better than cure”. In

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essay I will explain the benefits of preventing the disease and why I agree with

this

saying.

First

of all, prevention saves you the effort of seeking after a good doctor or the suitable medication, even it saves you the effort of being sick and weak. Since you will pay on your

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ou pay while you are healthy to keep it

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way?

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, when you feel ill, you always wonder: only if I washed my hand after I got back from the hospital or should I get the vaccine of the sessional flu

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mind when he catches an infection.

Secondly

, regarding the financial side of

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comparison, either if you take your vaccinations or you took the proper

health

education you will reduce your expenditure on the

health

issues saving

this

money for other life issues. Whereas, when you are sick you spen

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e doctor fees, the medications you are on and the

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care staff who helps you with your daily needs or even your beloved ones’ emotions and energy. In conclusion, when you prevent the disease, you are helping in making your nation a healthier one.

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ction rather than curing the illness.