getting divorce has some negative effects on the society. do you agree or not?

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era, while others reckon that broken home has some serious drawbacks. To be sure, a convincing statement is that getting a

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is playing an increasingly important

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in children's life. What is important is a child who experiences

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may mature quicker and develop responsibility at a younger age. If a kid's father moves out, and she has younger siblings than herself, she may have to play on a co-

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with her mother.

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will give her a sense of responsibility that other conditions of her life can be

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one, another point is that children will give benefit from

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if parents conflict with each other. As a matter of fact, after a messy

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, they are ready to make a commitment or themselves or their children to develop the personal skills that can help them for a better life.

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, it can be argued that

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problem does not always yield positive results, as discussed above. On top of

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a mother

and father fight over custody of the children it can be explained by the fact that a judge can give sole custody to only one parent and another person should pay child support,

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have a troubled childhood sometimes they should be with the mother or father,

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, they would have a dysfunctional family. Apart from

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to consider is depriving a close-knit-family indeed it causes some mental disease for children

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it will have a direct impact on their future. In summary, I would concede that get divorced does with some adverbs impact despite that fact; benefits created by it outweigh the disadvantages.

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believe that the government should provide a situation to stop it and reduce

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