Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree Provide relevant example if necessary

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I do agree with the statement
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Money makes life
simple
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simpler
in many aspects. People say if there is less
income but
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income, but
happiness is around
,
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,
then
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life goes smooth. But my question to
such
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kind of people is that there are many things which
can not
can not
cannot
be bought from low
salary
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. The standard of life can’t not be updated from low
salary
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, if you want your children to get
high class higher education
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a high class higher education
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,
if
any family
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any, family
member needs to be operated by a good doctor in a reputed hospital, everywhere money is needed.  Because, now a
days
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day
, no field is untouched from expense. Expenses are so high even in small cities.These expenses give a sort of
stress
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to man. If a person is not satisfied from
job but
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a job, but
a job but
he is getting big
salary
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, at least he can spend wherever he wants. Most importantly, he can join some swimming classes or he can go for meditation to relieve his
stress
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All I would like to conclude is that he can manage
stress
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with higher
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salary but
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salary, but
the
stress
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from lower
salary
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is difficult to manage.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remuneration
  • financial security
  • motivation
  • luxuries
  • material possessions
  • fulfillment
  • work-life balance
  • stress levels
  • mental well-being
  • job security
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