Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your aswer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

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time

activities

is considered

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are considered

for some people

such

as part of the educational plan.

However

, certain demographics of society think that the leisure

time

is only a waste of

time

. In my opinion, I agree with the free

time

should be included in the

studies’

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study

programs, due to

this

would help to create other abilities. Some people

are agree

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agree

with the

time

at the school only be used for regular subjects

such

as: math, language, science.

This

argument in general

express

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expresses

that it does not have leisure activities would mean that the children could share a quality

time

with their parents.

For instance

, in the

past there

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past, there

was not available a recreation

such

as course for children, and

this

allow have a more familiar life.

Nevertheless

, for the current

time

I think is not

possible

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possibly

understand the school

such

as

institution

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an institution

where the people only assist for learn regular subjects. In my

opnion

a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty

opinion

the primary and

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being of second rank or importance or value; not direct or immediate

secondary

should incorporate

obligatorialy

in an obligatory manner

obligatorily

lesure

time available for ease and relaxation

leisure

lesser

time

, because in the modern world the people have to work their soft skills. When we are adults,

for instance

, in the workplace is more relevant have emotional

inteligence

the ability to comprehend; to understand and profit from experience

intelligence

intelligent

than other kinds of abilities, and the moment for

learn

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learning

this

is in the

school

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school, although

although

of recreation

such

as sports, dance, club of

lecture

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lectures

the lecture

,

for example

. In conclusion, in my view the

lesure

time available for ease and relaxation

leisure

larger

laser

time

is essential for the children today, since

this

help

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helps

them to cultivate other soft abilities. In

this

way,

this

also

would be a great contribution for the education, and if

this

enhance the world

also

improve.