Some people think having set retirement age of 65 years for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive pension at an earlier age.

When we look at the society we find different occupations for various

class

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classes

of people. Each person has a common set of

last

working

age

. I

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

that out of the large

poplution

the people who inhabit a territory or state

population

populations

of the

world there

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world, there

are few

group

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groups

of people who think that it is not justifiable if one same

age

is

ste

put into a certain place or abstract location

set

sought

steep

as

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at

a retirement

age

. All

kind

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kinds

of jobs require different skills to

work

. In consideration to the same even the earnings are not similar.

Therefore

, in my

view individual

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view, individual

vocation should not have a similar

age

as set for their

last

age

to

work

.

Pension

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A pension that is

that is

attained after completion of one's

emplyment

the state of being employed or having a job

employment

is one

kind

of a component in the salary. A

kind

of an employment where more amount of physical

strength not

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strength, not

only owe to get settled at an earlier

age

but

also

desrve

be worthy or deserving

deserve

to get their pension early.

This

will ultimately help them to rest early and take care of

themself

reflexive form of "them"

themselves

.

Contary

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Contrary

to the above another

kind

of job where more intellectual skill is used rather than

phyical

involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit

physical

skill, can have more strength to extend their working efforts at a certain higher

age

.

Therefore

, these

kind

of community can survive to

work

more than the other

age

group. According to me they do not suffer much in

phycial

involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit

physical

health incase they

work

more.

Hence

, to recapitulate

acertaining

establish after a calculation, investigation, experiment, survey, or study

ascertaining

a

fix

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fixed

retirement

age

has been

bery

used as an intensifier

very

arbitary

based on or subject to individual discretion or preference or sometimes impulse or caprice

arbitrary

to

few

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a few kinds

few kinds

kind

of groups. It shall be more helpful for

thoes

plural of that

those

these

this

community

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communities

who owe to get their pension at an early

age

. In my

view the

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view, the

people of the society will be more satisfied in the event they have been given an opportunity to select their retirement

age

.