look at the pictures, which show the process of making cherry jam. Complete the sentences with a verb from the box in the correct form.

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This
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diagram illustrated how cherry is produced from the fresh fruits. There are nine main stages in the process, beginning at picking up and ending at labeling on
jars
Suggestion
the jars
.
First
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, the sheet is spread on the ground and the tree is shaken to get the cherries.
Then
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, the cherries are collected and
are transported
Suggestion
transport
to the processing plant where jam is produced.
Next
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, the leaves and stems are removed to get real cherries. All of selected cherries are washed by water. The
next
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stage is
to taken
Suggestion
taken
taking
the stone out of the middle of the cherry by the professional machine. So the stone and cherries are separated. The cherries are cooked and extra ingredients: sugar, pectin, lemon juice are added. After that, the quality
controllers check
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controllers, check
the completed jam to ensure the registered product standard. The
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finally
Suggestion
final
stage is to put jam into the jars and label it. Now, it is ready to distribute to
supermarket
Suggestion
the supermarket
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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