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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houselflat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter, explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear sir, Hope you are fine. I received your letter yesterday.I know
yours
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are very much disturbed because of the noise from my flat for the
last
 three days. I had a problem
in
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with
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 my kitchen, washing area. The drainage system was poor in my kitchen and the
waste water
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wastewater
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 is not properly draining. Due to
this
problem
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 I am suffocated more with bad odour coming from the drains. As you know I am an IT worker and getting less free time in the morning, so I was forced to do the work at night. The
worker's
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 are free at
the
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night time.Unfortunately, they need some drilling in the wall which makes more sound outside. I strongly apologise for the inconvenience
happened
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 to you and to
family
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your family
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 for the
last
 three days. I am assuring you that the repairing work will finish within one day. And I
really
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 thankful for the adjustment done with your whole family Hope you will consider my situation. Thanking you, your's faithfully
neil
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mishra
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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