Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better?

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High schools
is required
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are required
all students to wear
school
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uniforms and some high schools are required to wear what they prefer. According to my knowledge, schools in Sri Lanka, India, etc. Those country’s high schools have proper uniforms
to identify
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identify
student’s
school
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and area.
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, the discipline starts from how they dress in
school
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uniform
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. It will help to learn how to wear proper and formal clothing. According to my experience, in Sri Lankan government provide free uniforms to students. It must be valuable for students who come from lower income families.
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, some schools are not provided free
uniform
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and students have to buy themselves.
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, some students think
that is
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wasting
money
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for buy
uniform
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because they can wear only for
school
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. If they
wear casual
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wear, casual
it has multiple uses.
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, sometime uniforms are uncomfortable to wear. I believe that uniforms should not be
main part
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a main part
the main part
of education.
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, it is just an identification
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of
students and
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uniforms could not measure quality and learning process.
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, the government
spend
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spends
more
money
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for uniforms but it is kind of wasting. If they spend that
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for
school
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development that would be a great opportunity for students. In conclusion, wearing uniforms
have
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has
both positive and negative impact as I mention before.
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to that, need to give a priority to the reputation and the discipline rather than the
money
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. In my view, high schools need mandatory to wear a
uniform
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.
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