Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increases capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Crime
in society
is increasing day by day, the sense of fear is also
pilling
up among a column of wood or steel or concrete that is driven into the ground to provide support for a structure
piling
socities
which is leading to a demand of capital an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
societies
sockets
punishment
throughout the world. As far as my opinion is concerned I
believe that Accept comma addition
concerned, I
death
sentence is not necessary
in each Suggestion
necessarily
crime but
in some Accept comma addition
crime, but
henious
cases extremely wicked, deeply criminal
heinous
death
warrent
is show to be reasonable or provide adequate ground for
warrant
most appropriate solution
.
Suggestion
the most appropriate solution
To begin
with, every individual has right to live its life, comiting
perform an act, usually with a negative connotation
committing
crime
is always not intentially
because sometimes with intention; in an intentional manner
intentionally
such
circumstances arose around which compells
the individual to do force somebody to do something
compels
unlawfull
activity. not conforming to legality, moral law, or social convention
unlawful
majority
of minor crimes are Suggestion
Majority
sitution
based the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situation
such
as stealling
money, chain snatching, house robbery, and murder in self defence which are either due to financial problems or family disputes. the act of taking something from someone unlawfully
stealing
Last
year, there was an article published in newspaper "Society
vs
Crime
" which stated that 80-85 percent of crimes are due to socail
considerations and their relating to human society and its members
social
impact
on society
is extremely negligeble
. Individuals involved in so small as to be meaningless; insignificant
negligible
such
crimes need proper councelling
during their sentence term so that they can live socialized life when they get out of something that provides direction or advice as to a decision or course of action
counselling
bars
.
On the flip side, strong message and sense of fear among criminals is necessary to curb the Suggestion
the bars
henious
crimes. The stringent laws along with the fear of capital extremely wicked, deeply criminal
heinous
punishment
might create an atmosphere where a person would think about own life at stake before comiting
crimes perform an act, usually with a negative connotation
committing
such
as rape, honour killing and mob violence. For instance
, the crime
rate in Germany declined to nearly half from the time their government enacted new law which provides the death
sentence as stringent punishment
in cases that are extremely cruel and inhumane in nature.
To conclude capital punishment
is not the only solution to deal with each and every crime
, the nature and impact
of the crime
must be eveluated
as the crimes which evaluate or estimate the nature, quality, ability, extent, or significance of
evaluated
ave
have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
have
no or
minor Accept comma addition
no, or
impact
on society
must be dealt with imprisonment but
the Accept comma addition
imprisonment, but
crime
that has far more impact
on society
in such
cases death
penality
would the act of punishing
penalty
be appropriate solution
.Suggestion
be an appropriate solution
be appropriate solved
be appropriate solved solved
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