The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates weekly
sales
at
small
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a small
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resturant
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restaurant
in
downtown
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the downtown
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business district from
october
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October
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7th to
october
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October
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13th.
Lunch's
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Lunch
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sale was almost
same
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the same
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in
first
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the first
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two days of
this
week, on
day
one it was $2400 and $2450 on
day
two.On
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Wednesday
wednessday
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Wednesday
, there was
good
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a good
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hike in
sales
with $2595 but got decreased on
following
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the following
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day
to $2375.On
friday
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Friday
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, the sale
elivated
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elevated
to $2500 but
droped
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dropped
on weekends to $1950 and $1550
repectively
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respectively
.
Whereas
when we look at the
sales
of dinner time, it's been seen that there was a frequent raise in
sales
on weekdays and experiencing
downfall
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a downfall
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in
the
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apply
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sales
of
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at
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weekends.
First
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The first
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day
of the week started with $3623, got increased on
tuesday
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Tuesday
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to $3850.There was no significant change in
sales
of
next
day
but on
thursday
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Thursday
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sales
got reduced by $50.On
friday
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Friday
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sale bumps up to $4350
whereas
,
at the end
of
this
week
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the week
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it had a sharp drop of $2900 on
staturday
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Saturday
Saturdays
and $2450 on Sunday.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, day with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "droped" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuations
  • peak sales
  • troughs
  • seasonal adjustments
  • promotional impact
  • customer footfall
  • external factors
  • forecasting
  • performance analysis
  • trend analysis
  • sales metrics
  • business district
  • revenue streams
  • consumer behavior
  • market trends
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