The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates weekly
sales
at small
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a small
resturant
in Correct your spelling
restaurant
downtown
business district from Correct article usage
the downtown
october
7th to Change the capitalization
October
october
13th.Change the capitalization
October
Lunch's
sale was almost Change noun form
Lunch
same
in Correct article usage
the same
first
two
days of Correct article usage
the first
this
week, on day
one it was $2400 and $2450 on day
two.On Correct your spelling
Wednesday
wednessday
, there was Correct your spelling
Wednesday
good
hike in Add an article
a good
the good
sales
with $2595 but got decreased on following
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the following
day
to $2375.On
friday
, the sale Change the capitalization
Friday
elivated
to $2500 but Correct your spelling
elevated
droped
on weekends to $1950 and $1550 Correct your spelling
dropped
repectively
.Correct your spelling
respectively
Whereas
when we look at the sales
of dinner time, it's been seen that there
was a frequent raise in sales
on weekdays and experiencing downfall
in Add an article
a downfall
the
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apply
sales
of
weekends.Change preposition
at
First
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The first
day
of the week started with $3623, got increased on tuesday
to
$3850.There was no significant change in Change the capitalization
Tuesday
sales
of next
day
but on thursday
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Thursday
sales
got reduced by $50.On friday
sale bumps up to $4350 Change the capitalization
Friday
whereas
, at the end
of this
week
it had a sharp drop of $2900 on Add an article
the week
staturday
and $2450 on Sunday.Correct your spelling
Saturday
Saturdays
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