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Some people think that having people from different nationalities and cultural backgrounds living together in the same country makes the country develop faster. Do you agree?

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There is a line of thinking that states that a multicultural
country
 can achieve a more rapid development. I agree that the different people with their culture and knowledge helps a
place
 do grow. In
first
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the first place
place
 when a
place
 is closed to outside individuals, the local
place
 maintains the same ideas and line of working. Keeping traditions and ideas is important, but with the introduce of
foreign
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foreignness
 in the society, new ways of acting and working will be implemented as they know what is best in their original
country
. A good example is the Canadian
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
 market, because the
country
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country's
 population is low, they recruit people from other places
from
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of
 the world, and
as a result
, that improved the systems of working and very qualified employees help the companies to grow.
In addition
, accepting families from other places around the globe will result in a cultural enrichment. That will lead to several changes in the local society, even if
this
 could bring a bad side like bias from the local, other ways of living would be known.
For instance
, in the beginning of the 20th century, Brazil has welcomed families from several different places like Italy, Germany and European east, and thanks to that, there was an increase of different physical types, habits and different foods. That
also
 brought the
country
 several industries that generated jobs that time and it is still generating. To conclude, the growing and development of a
country
 can be a result of the insertion of different kinds of cultures, habits and new people in a local society.

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