The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The
two
illustration
Change to a plural noun
illustrations
show examples
depict the design of a wave-energy engine and its location options.
Overall
, it shows how energy is made inside
electricity
Correct article usage
an electricity
show examples
generator from
two
main elements: waves and
air flow
Correct your spelling
airflow
show examples
. There are
two
influence
direction
Fix the agreement mistake
directions
show examples
in a wave-energy machine. From the top,
air flow
Correct your spelling
airflow
show examples
go
Change the verb form
goes
show examples
inside the machine
then
Correct word choice
and then
show examples
activate the upper turbine. From the bottom, water through the entrance go inside the chambers,
air
Correct word choice
and air
show examples
flow from it will activate the lower turbine. Comparing
two
Correct article usage
the two
show examples
location
Change to a plural noun
locations
show examples
suggests that
also
have pros and cons, one situates near
mainland
Correct article usage
the mainland
show examples
and vice versa. It shows that the nearer one produces poor output since it only reaches small waves but
more
Add a missing verb
is more
show examples
economical than the
further
one which produces high output by large waves.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words two with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "waves" was used 3 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: