Write a letter to friend for explaining about you left your coat at his place. How would you like to get it back and why it is uergent.

#friend #coat #place #uergent

I am already vastly missing you

eventhough

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even though

it has been only

few

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a few

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days since we met. Well, I am writing

this

letter to tell you about my winter

coat

which I left at your place. After coming back home, I realized that my

coat

is missing. I checked my car twice and my home as well but no luck! I suddenly remember about the place where I

moght

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might

have left it. I am certain that it is in a cupboard, located in your room. I left home right after talking with you and forget to go

upstair

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upstairs

and grab it. It would be

great

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help if you could bring

coat

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a coat

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my place as I have all my credit cards and licence in the left pocket of the

coat

. As your university is nearby my house, you can give it back to me at your convenience or else I can pick

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it up

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form

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from

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the university. Please let me know. I will be waiting for you and my

coat

! Yours sincerely, Jaimini

Submitted by nayee.jaimini on Wed Mar 11 2020

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1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

171 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to friend for explaining about you left your coat at his place. How would you like to get it back and why it is uergent.

The Greeting

Friends and famHy bring more happiness than money and possessions. How far do you agree with this statement?

Many factory foods and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. do you agree or disagree?

Thanks to the development of science and technology, the lifestyle have become more and more similar across the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Online shopping has gained immense popularity in recent years, challenging the traditional brick-and-mortar stores. Examine the advantages and disadvantages of both methods of shopping and give your opinion.

Some people believe that the intemet is increasing the gap between the rich and poor, while others argue that it helps to reduce this gap. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion