Write a letter to friend for explaining about you left your coat at his place. How would you like to get it back and why it is uergent.

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I am already vastly missing you

eventhough

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even though

it has been only

few

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a few

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days since we met. Well, I am writing

this

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letter to tell you about my winter

coat

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which I left at your place. After coming back home, I realized that my

coat

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is missing. I checked my car twice and my home as well but no luck! I suddenly remember about the place where I

moght

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might

have left it. I am certain that it is in a cupboard, located in your room. I left home right after talking with you and forget to go

upstair

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upstairs

and grab it. It would be

great

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a great

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help if you could bring

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coat

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a coat

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my place as I have all my credit cards and licence in the left pocket of the

coat

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. As your university is nearby my house, you can give it back to me at your convenience or else I can pick

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it up

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form

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from

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the university. Please let me know. I will be waiting for you and my

coat

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! Yours sincerely, Jaimini

Submitted by nayee.jaimini on Wed Mar 11 2020

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

171 words

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Write a letter to friend for explaining about you left your coat at his place. How would you like to get it back and why it is uergent.

The Greeting

the pie charty below show the average of household expenditure in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010

You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • explain why you will be visiting the town • give details of where you will be staying • ask your friend to recommend some evening entertainment

Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

What are the prons and cons of going to live or study abroad?