In the past people liked to store knowledge in books. However, in the present, we prefer to store knowledge on the internet. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Previously the
knowledge
and the
information
that the people had gained was stored in the
book
because they had no technology to
store
the
information
in
internet
. The only way to
store
the
information
is
book
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the book
a book
. Now a
days
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day
with the improvement of the technology people can express their ideas and thoughts through
internet and
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internet, and
it can be stored in the
internet
. So man can get the
information
and gain
knowledge
easily. There are many advantages over disadvantages in storing the
information
and the
knowledge
in
internet
. Previously
book
is the only way to
store
the ideas and the thoughts which
is
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are
very slow
process
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processed
to spread the ideas and thoughts so the learning process is slow. But in the present day, people use
internet
to
store
or share their ideas by
this
way people learn fast and
knowledge
spreads everywhere or every corner of the world so faster than the previous process. There
are
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is
possibility to destroy the
knowledge
when men gathered
knowledge
in the
book but
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book, but
now men have
internet
so they can
store
their thoughts, inventions safely. So it can be said that people have got many advantages to
store
the
knowledge
in
internet
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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