The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives a picture of how
the
Correct article usage
apply
birth
and death
changed in New Zealand from 1901 to 2101.
Overall
, while
the rate
of death
illustrated a steady increase, the birth
rate
had a fluctuated
trend over an interval of eleven years.
As can be seen from the chart that the Replace the word
fluctuating
number of
Correct quantifier usage
apply
death
rate
was approximately 10000s in
the beginning of the period and had more than Change the preposition
at
double
Wrong verb form
doubled
that
in 1961. Until 2001, the data on the Correct pronoun usage
apply
rate
of death
continued increasing progressively, reaching just about 30000s. Then
the rate
went up dramatically in the period from 2021 to 2061 but after that, it leveled
off at around 60000s and dropped slightly in 2101.
Change the spelling
levelled
On the contrary
, the birth
rate
was much higher than the death
rate
, it started below 20000s
and reached a peak of more than 60000 in 1961. But the Correct article usage
the 20000s
rate
of birth
fell steadily in 1981 whose number showed 50000s. Since then
, the number of birth
has varied between 65000 and 50000 and in 2001, there was a slight rise nearly
55000. Change preposition
of nearly
However
, the trend is expected to decline to over 40000 by the end of the century.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Replace the words birth, death, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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