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Some people think that young people can learn useful skills by playing electronic and computer games. Others argue that people who play electronic and computer games are wasting their time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #skills #computer #games #time
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The video
game
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 is becoming a more and more popular leisure activity. Some individuals hold the opinion that people can learn many things from it, while the others think that it will waste a lot of
time
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. I believe the former's view is more reasonable because
firstly
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, computer games can make player smarter and
secondly
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, playing electronic games is
also
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 a good way to increase people's communicate skills to make new friends. Computer games could make people more clever. These games include many blocks to let players address. People have to quickly enough to react the difficulties in some games, or they have to try their best to organise a state's development and propose different strategies to win the other rivals. The process of playing
is not easy generally
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is generally not easy
.
For example
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, for the
game
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 Company of
Hero
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Heroes
, players have
to
being one more than one
two
 on one hand to develop his basis as fast as he or she can, and who have to control his
soliders
an enlisted man or woman who serves in an army
soldiers
 to attack the enemy at the same
time
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. These details can improve a person's managing skills and make
he
that male; objective male pronoun
him
 or her become more wise.
In addition
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, the video
game
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 is helpful for increasing communication skills. Some educators could argue that it
make
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makes
 students spend too many hours on it so that there is no enough
time
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 in their study.
However
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, the concept of study should
not only limit in
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not only limit
 the field of units learn at school. Many games need several people
play
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to play
 together. They must cooperate with each other and protect
game
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mates
a thick flat pad used as a floor covering
mats
 in the necessary
time
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, which could improve their relationship and makes players to
understand in proper way
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understand the proper way
understand in the proper way
understand in a proper way
 to communicate with other mates and cooperate with them. In conclusion, I think the advantages of playing electronic games overweigh disadvantages, because video games can make players more intelligent and develop their communication skills. It
is
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will be
 interesting to see its influences for humans in the future.
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