Many societies has homeless people. some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money. To what extent do you agree?

Recent technological advancements

has made

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have made

some jobs obsolete due to which unemployment has risen and there has been a noticeable increase in

number

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the number

numbers

of homeless people. It is often argued that societies should help the destitute by donating them

money

.

However

, I believe that

money

should not be used to support people on

streets

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the streets

or shelter homes because

this

approach is not sustainable in

long run

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the long run

and often times

easy availability

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the easy availability

of

money

through donation make these people lazy. By donating

money

, immediate needs of homeless people can be fulfilled, but it is not a long-term solution to fix their problems. They can use the

money

to

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

their minimum basic needs,

however

,

money

is an exhaustible resource and they cannot carry out their lives based on the received sum. It does not provide them an opportunity to come out of their poverty-stricken situation.

For example

, every year shelter

homes

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home

rely

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relies

on donations from philanthropists or government as they cannot sustain themselves. As the

money

to make their ends meet, on day to day basis, becomes easily available to poor people without doing much of physical efforts. They often develop

lazy attitude

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a lazy attitude

towards work which demands effort

as a result

of which they end up being on

street

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the street

.

For example

, in spite of having

huge demand

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a huge demand

for physical

labor

a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages

labour

in developed and developing

economies many

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economies, many

poor-people cite unemployment as the primary reason for their situation. In conclusion, I believe that

instead

of giving monetary support societies should explore other avenues like training these people for better work options or creation of jobs to help them as

this

will provide them

opportunity

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the opportunity

an opportunity

to look for their needs in

long run

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the long run

and curtail them from developing

negative attitude

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a negative attitude

toward the work.