Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students’ sports activities as they allocate to their libraries. Do you agree?

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Universities and Colleges should equally prioritise both sport and games along with the education as sports play a crucial role in an individual's personality development.Education contributes its part to develop a student in

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perspective. I completely agree the given statement on Sports should be treated as equally as studies by Educational Institutions.

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discussion is regarding Universities and Colleges should support their students to take part in sports by providing required funds for the equipment

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Play ground and other necessities related to sports. Universities should treat Sports as important as Education because playing sports and games will help in developing physical and mental fitness of an individual.Sports will

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provide relaxation and act as a stress relief in a person's ups and downs.There will be a rapid growth in a person's

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graph once sports are chosen as employment with a passion for the game.

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, P.V Sindhu, an Indian badminton player has become enormously popular once she had chosen her

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as Badminton. Educational Institutions must allocate and spend funds on sports as they allocate to the Library.Institutions need to encourage its students to take part in various sports and games along with the Educational activities.Universities need to include sports in the course curriculum of a student and they need to appoint relevant sports coaches to teach students about the game by spending funds so that students can get involved in the playing activities effectively and efficiently.Universities have spent funds to organise campaigns that can make students aware of the way sports play an increasing role in

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the student's career

a student's career

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, awarding the winners of the game in national and state level competition with valuable rewards will acquire individual recognition. In conclusion

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Universities should spend funds on the sports by prioritising both sports and studies equally. The Educational institutions should spend equal money on games as it involves in developing an individual personally

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mentally and professionally.

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Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students’ sports activities as they allocate to their libraries. Do you agree?

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