Some people prefer shopping centers, while others prefer local markets. What are the advantages of each? Share your opinion and any personal experience

Humans have varied choices of where to purchase their goods. Some individuals like their shopping in a shopping malls,oth
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rs would rather shop in an open
market
. Malls offer their goods and products in a clean environment,whe
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,
eas open
market
displays fresher products directly from the sources of production. The environments, shopping marts offer appears to be a healthy atmosphere. The goods displayed for sale are well packaged and there is minimal or total lack of contacts with vectors of diseases ( fl
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(
s). Shop rite of Festàc town is an example
this
. Food produce
such
as perishable items,whi
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,
h include frozen fish
meat and
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fish, meat
vegetables, are well packaged and displayed in sealed containers to prevent insects that could transmit diseases from having contacts with them.
This
manner of packaging goods ensures that the items for sale are safe and healthy for the consumption of the public.
Thus
, the outlook of galleries promotes good health.
On the other hand
, those who rather patronize open
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the open market
market
do so because it offers fresher products.
Although
the marketplace may not be the ideal health wise, they get healthier items directly from the farms, and
this
appears to surpass the unhealthy atmosphere of buying and selling. When
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When, for
for instance
, I go to the
market
for shopping, I choose buying pumpkin leaf and other fruits from Igbudu advertise, because I know they get supplies directly from Okene farms every Thursday.
This
ensures that my family is supplied with fresh food that promotes healthy living. To conclude,
therefore
, it would appear that some people do their shopping in a shopping mall because of the neatness of the environment. Othe
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Others, however
however
, chose the roadside retail as it offers more healthier produce directly from the sources.
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