countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
It is certainly true that
dissimilarties
between the countries are becoming vague due to increasing trend of shopping globally by which people can buy anythingthe quality of being dissimilar
dissimilarities
,
anytime and anywhere.Personally speakingAccept space
,
,
Accept space
,
this
type of development
is positive in all aspects.
To commence with, many positive points are related
to the popularity of global shopping.Suggestion
relate
Firstly
, pepole
are becoming more and more tolerant and respectful (plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
to
each others because there are no conflicts due to their way of livingSuggestion
of
.
Accept space
.
In other words
, people accept other human easily having similarities.On the hand, migrants to
the host countries feel more confident because the have less inferiority complex regarding to their clothes and looks. Suggestion
in
Secondly
, this
type of development
brings a glore
of a shape that spreads outward
flare
businnes
options globallya commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
.
Trade Accept space
.
perpetuate
a good relation Suggestion
perpetuates
btween
countries. It is clearly seen that nations internal to, involving members of (a group of people)
between
whoare
financially dependent on each other, would be less likely to have Suggestion
who are
arms
conflicts.
Suggestion
armed
Futhermore
in addition
Furthermore
,
Accept space
,
this
process has proven benefited
to Suggestion
benefits
benefit
to benefit
indiviual
to expand his or her a human being
individual
businness
on a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
global level
. Suggestion
a global level
the global level
In other words
, a person can compete and improve his businness
worldwide by taking a chance to sell his products in many countries a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
businesses
instead
of selling in his own country. For example
,
amazon success Accept space
,
is resulted
from Suggestion
results
this
kind of development
. Therefore
, this
increasing trend of global shopping can be considered as a fully positive development
In contrary, some people belive
that accept as true; take to be true
believe
this
is a negative development
due to decrease in cultural values. According to them, culture is inextricably linked to the factors how we live, what we wear and eat. Moreover
, our way of living reflects our culture. Having same type
of living will detrimental Suggestion
the same type
forour
Suggestion
for our
cultutre
.a particular society at a particular time and place
culture
cultures
However
, the opponents are not aware about the fact that culture and moral values are deep
rooted and cannot be destroyed by these minor superficial changes.
Suggestion
deeply
in
conclusion, there is no scepticism that the Suggestion
In
similaries
between countries are the quality of being similar
similarities
incresing
and becoming greater or larger
increasing
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
this
is totally a positive trend while its negative implications are too negligible to consider it as negative
Suggestion
a negative development
development
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