The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The chart illustrates
water
percentage used in six regions of the world for various objectives such
as Industrial, Agricultural and Domestic.
Overall
, in Africa, Central Asia
, South East Asia
and South America
water
consumption is more for Agricultural uses, while
North
Change preposition
in North
America
and Europe water
utilized
for Industrial uses. The lowest percentage Add a missing verb
is utilized
usage
for Domestic.
Looking at the information more specifically in South America
percentage of water
utilized for Agricultural was 71%, while
North America
and Europe utilized 39% and 53% respectively for Agricultural. However
the Add a comma
,However
usage
of water
for Domestic uses
was less than 20% in all Fix the agreement mistake
use
the
three countries. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, the usage
of water
for Industrial uses
was more in North Fix the agreement mistake
use
America
and Europe with 48% and 53% respectively while
South
Change preposition
in South
America
it is only 10%.
On the other hand
, the water
utilization in Africa, Central and South East Asia
for Agricultural more than other
two objectives, 84%, 88% 81% respectively. Correct article usage
the other
Although
less than 10% of water
is put to use for Domestic use also
the usage
of water
in Africa, Central Asia
and South East Asia
for industrial use was less than 15%, 7%, 5%, 12
% respectively.Correct word choice
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