You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you are selling the television Describe the television Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it

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Dear John, I hope you are doing well, I am writing

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letter to let you that I just bought a new big television in my living room

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black Friday. And I am trying to get rid off

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my previous television. I think you probably take a look at it. If you would like to buy.

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an amazing led tv from Samsung. The screen size is 43 inches, good for your apartment. It is only 2 years old and still have 3 years extended warranty on it. Mint condition, no issue.

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, I lost the original remote, but you can use it with your smartphone through an app

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free of cost. I am looking to sell it for $230. You are my good friend, so I can do $200 for you if

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interested. Anyways, I am closing

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letter now and I am waiting to hear from you. Best wishes Harmanpreet Singh

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

159 words

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