Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Punishment
to criminals plays an important role to maintain law and order.
Although
it is thought by some fixed
type
of
punishment
should be
give
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given
to each
type
of criminal
,
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,
others believe that before
annoucement
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the announcement
announcement
of
punishment
,
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,
authorities ought to
cosider
deem to be
consider
motive
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the motive
behind the criminal activity. In my
oipinon
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
opinions
,
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,
there should be fixed term of
punishment
,
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,
regardless the
situtaion
the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situation
of criminal.
on
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On
the one hand, people believe that for specific offence there should be particular
penality
the act of punishing
penalty
and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
also
agree with
this
given opinion
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opinion given
. To start with
,
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,
every offender would aware about what
kind
of
punishment
he will get after
commiting
perform an act, usually with a negative connotation
committing
a
crime
.
This
kind
of approach will create a fear in criminal's mind before doing it.
Ajus
(Greek mythology) a giant with 100 eyes; was guardian of the heifer Io and was slain by Hermes
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a
result it
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result, it
will deter them to
do
engage in
make
any
kind
of mistake.
it
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It
is clearly seen that that
coutries
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country
countries
have
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has
fixed terms of
penalities
the act of punishing
penalties
for specific
type
of
crime
have less
crime
rate as compared to the counterparts.
Therefore
, fixed
type
of
punishment
would
beneficial
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benefit
for society safety.
On the other hand
, others hold a different opinion that
punishment
should be
give
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given
by considering their circumstances while performing
criminal activity
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a criminal activity
criminal activities
due to the following factors
.
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.
First reason
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The first reason
of
that is
sometimes
crime
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a crime
is committed for self safety.
In other
words people
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words, people
hit and kill
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
person to save himself from the criminal and
this
kind
of self security cannot be
consider
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considered
as a
crime
.
This
type
of
reason
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reasoning
does not look
apealing
able to attract interest or draw favorable attention
appealing
.
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.
Morever
in addition
Moreover
,
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,
this
kind
of approach will create utter chaos in the society.Every criminal will try to save himself by
talking
very attractive; capturing interest
taking
shelter of
this
law. In conclusion, despite different people have different views
,
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe there should be a fixed term of
punishment
shuld
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
be there for
specific
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specific crimes
a specific crime
crime
.
In contrast
, considering one's situation during
crime
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the crime
a crime
is not acceptable at all.
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