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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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Visiting places of fantasy give great pleasure, but before that there should be some strings attached to it, tourists should be aware of climatic conditions, Fooding and clothing. Climate shouldn't cross the normal temperature, food should be adjusted to the visitors, clothing precautions should be taken to overcome the weather condition. Tourists visit
such
 places to experience the extreme weather conditions with some precautions. There are several disadvantages of visiting
such
 places, lack of guidance, transport issues
,
Accept space
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unpredictable conditions, Unplanned sheltering and high expenses.The people's intention of visiting
such
 places is to grab the attention from peers and they later struggle to survive there. Benefits of visiting
such
 places are new experiences, different creatures, different languages
,
Accept space
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photographs. The human's brain tends to expand when they visit fantasy places. So there are more disadvantages over advantages, better follow some trusted tourist consultancies to fulfil your dream places like Antarctica or Sahara.

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