The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So government and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. The what extent so you agreed or disagree?

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The environmental problems are so important issue today. From the past, many countries had conferences to discuss it, but it’s been hard to contract an agreement for every country because they need to protect their domestic industry.
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, some measures should be taken
in
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at
micro level and
also
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macro level. In my opinion, government and large organizations must take the leadership to these problems. Our world is mostly based on tom-down basis, so when a company
get
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gets
informed about particular instruction about their operations, the company have to follow it.
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, in
Hokkaido which
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Hokkaido, which
is located in the north of Japan, take clear measure in many stores.
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, the stores don’t give customers
plastic
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bags. When I
first
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visited a convenience store there, I expected to be given the
plastic
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bag, but I wasn’t. I was so upset because I bought many things
then
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. After
all I
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all, I
bought another bag at the same store, and
finally
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got things
into
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in
that bag.
This
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example shows that it is no surprise in Hokkaido not to offer
plastic
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bags.
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measure is not taken by just one individual
store but
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store, but
by
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from
all stores and supermarkets that were told to do so from the upper organizations. Some similar solutions
are being tried
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have been tried
recently. At some cafe, straws made of paper are used right now. Customers actually have no
choice even
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choice, even
if they want
plastic
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ones and
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they have to use paper straws which are eco-friendly. In the same way, once a large institute starts something great for the environment, the branch will do the same thing.
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, it will get popular and
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naturally
in our everyday life.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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