The graph below shows the number of passenger railway journeys made in Great Britain between 1950s and 2004/5
The line graph compares the amount of passenger railway journeys made in the UK over a period of 55 years.
It is noticeable that the popularity of means of transport increased by the end of the period.
In 1950,
national
rail network and London Underground systems fluctuated significantly. In Correct article usage
the national
first
decade the Change the article
the first
amount
of people who used a National rail network reached a peak, Change the quantifier
number
while
London Underground was falling from approximately 740 total
to about 735 Change preposition
in total
sum
. Both systems exceeded the billion passenger journey mark, with the two decades Change to a plural noun
sums
seen
the most noticeable witnessing soars.
The light railway and metro systems did not have significantly changed than the other two networksWrong verb form
seeing
,
but rose from approximately 0.1 Remove the comma
apply
much
to about 0.8 total by the end of the period.
The most stunning aspect is that the journey numbers for the National Correct quantifier usage
apply
railway
Network fit into those in the London Underground, in one word I can say that it was Change the capitalization
Railway
a
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