Nowadays, it is possible to move ocean creatures from their natural habitat at sea and have them relocated to marine parks for the purpose of education and entertainment. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Explain your reasons and support them with specific examples.

Nowadays, wildlife sanctuaries and

marine

parks are well established, and the administrators are very keen about making the best natural place for any wildlife animal. It has become more evident that we could be able to even make the facilities adaptable to

ocean

creatures as well.

As a result

, we could be able to transfer

marine

animals to their artificial facilities for knowledge and recreational purpose. In my opinion, I think that there are more advantages than disadvantages

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to

this

process.

Firstly

, the disadvantages are relocation of the natural

habitants

the type of environment in which an organism or group normally lives or occurs

habitats

of certain species might decrease the longevity of their

time

period.

This

is because, they have originally involved deeply

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in

certain weather conditions, their flora and fauna available to them. So, anything

that is

artificial could not entirely

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

fulfilled

its needs and

as a

result it

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result, it

could end up in a negative position.

For example

, take the case of sharks, they are habited to warm temperatures, and their natural food appetite is

also

very large. In

marine

parks they could not completely supply its

needs thereby

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needs, thereby

decreasing the life span of the sharks. At the same

time

, their freedom is

also

limited resulting

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limited, resulting

in much more detrimental

effects

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effect

.

On the contrary

, the advantages are, there is more scope for people to gain more knowledge about the

marine

animals, how they behave to certain conditions, what are the genetics they are inducing. To answer all these questions, people must go every

time

to

ocean

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the ocean

and get the results from there, that could be much more hazardous.

For example

, a group of students are interested in the research of sharks, so taking them to a

marine

park is easier than taking them to the

ocean

and risking their lives. At the same

time

,

this

could help them to cut the cost, the risk involved and could be used by the public for recreational purpose. To conclude, it would be painful to make the

ocean

creators suffer for our

needs but

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needs, but

it would be the best choice to transfer to them to make our lives easier and safer.