Some people believe that elderly emplyoees are more useful, while others believe that young employees are better..Discuss both views and your own opinion

Experts throughout both the developing and developed world have debated whether the old age employees or young employees are more beneficial to the company.
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essay will discuss both the views with examples of the UK government and Oxford University to demonstrate points and prove arguments. There is ample evidence that supports the argument that the elderly employees provide better decisions under pressure than their younger counterparts. The central reason behind
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is, veterans have invaluable hands-on experience which plays a key role in making day to day, important and crucial decisions and guidance to the young generation.
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, recent empirical research by the UK government demonstrated that companies in the UK
maintaining
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maintain
are maintaining
70% of employees as the higher age group has seen unprecedented and
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sustained
growth of 25% for over 5 years.
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there is a case for enthusiasm, practical approach, risk-taking ability and even learning new technology, it is surprising that some companies still prefer a higher percentage of the employed as old-age.
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is largely because as emerging markets are predicted to be changing at fast-
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, necessary skills need to be adopted quickly which suits
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best
to the features of the young generation.
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, an extensive study by Oxford University shows that over 90% of jobs around the globe would be required skills that have adaptability and problem-solving ability. From arguments and examples given, I believe that in order to achieve sustainable growth in the future, companies should counterbalance between both age groups, as companies require guidance and decisions of the elderly as well as pro-activeness and adaptability of youth.

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