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describe your dream job and explain why it is your dream job

#dream #job
Today I am going to talk about my
dream
job
 in the future. I have a plan to tell you what the
job
 is, the sort of experience I might need to do it, and why I love it. My
dream
job
 would be to be a travel writer! For starter, travel writers are often self-employed. They trip the world to interesting places and
then
 write magazine, newspaper and internet articles about their journey. Having said that, possibly qualifications that provide a good basic level of English language advantageous, and maybe even creative writing or journalism courses might help you to build confidence and reinforce a writing style. In the
next
 place, to do
this
 kind of work I have to be willing to go to lots of new places. You
also
 need to be able to write fluently and in different styles for different publications. Tour writers must be very flexible, as you might need to go to challenging or uncomfortable places and to ride at short notice.
Finally
, the reason I would like to make
this
 task so much is that I get passion to new places. That was a wonderful experience for me. I would so enjoy telling other people what it was like and encouraging them to go on an adventure of their own. I
also
 like communicating ideas in writing, it would be wonderful to make a living out of the two things I enjoy most – trek and writing! All things considers, there are very few opportunities to make a living as a travel writer, so I think it might have to stay as my imagination career, rather than my actual
job
! Even so, I think it is important to have a
dream
, because
otherwise
 how can you ever have a
dream
 come true!

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