The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
The diagram illustrates the stages in the life of the
salmon
, from birth to maturity. It is clear that
there are six* main stages as the salmon
develops from egg to mature adult. We can also
see that salmon
spend time in three distinct locations during the cycle, moving from river to estuary to ocean and then
back upstream. Salmon
begin their lives in rivers where the adult fish lay and incubate their eggs. After emerging from eggs, the young salmon
spend the next stage of their lives being reared in freshwater areas. Then
, at some point in their development, the fish swim downstream to river estuaries where rearing continues. ocean
, where they eventually become fully grown adults. Capitalize word
Ocean
Finally
, the adult fish travel back upstream to spawning areas of rivers; here they reproduce and lay their eggs, and the life cycle begins anew.Submitted by ebr7ali on
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