Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is true that medicines and other products are routinely tested on
animals
before they are cleared for human
use
.
While
I tend towards the viewpoint that animal testing is morally wrong, I would have to support a limited amount of animal
experimentation
for the development of medicines. On the one hand, there are clear ethical arguments against animal
experimentation
. To
use
a common example of
this
practice, laboratory mice may be given an illness so that the effectiveness of a new drug can be measured. Opponents of
such
research
argue that humans have no right to subject
animals
to
this
kind of trauma
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and that the lives of all creatures should be respected. They believe that the benefits to humans do not justify the suffering caused
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and that scientists should
use
alternative methods of
research
.
On the other hand
, reliable alternatives to animal
experimentation
may not always be available. Supporters of the
use
of
animals
in medical
research
believe that a certain amount of suffering on the part of mice or rats can be justified if human lives are saved. They argue that opponents of
such
research
might feel differently if a member of their own
families
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needed a medical treatment that had been developed through the
use
of animal
experimentation
. Personally, I agree with the banning of animal testing for
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products, but I feel that it may be a necessary evil where new drugs and medical procedures are concerned. In conclusion, it seems to me that it would be wrong to ban testing on
animals
for vital medical
research
until equally effective alternatives have been developed.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • glamour
  • wealth
  • achievements
  • portrayed
  • overshadow
  • influenced
  • lifestyles
  • unrealistic
  • expectations
  • values
  • promoting
  • hard work
  • perseverance
  • inspire
  • positive impact
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