Some young people are leaving the country side to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?
Humans have always migrated to different places in search of better opportunities. But, in the
last
few decades, human migration to cities have
increased by many folds, leaving old Change the verb form
has
people
to fend for themselves. In this
essay, I shall discuss the reasons behind it and what could governments do alleviate
Fix the infinitive
to alleviate
this
issue.
One of the main reasons people
move to cities is in search of jobs. Compared to last
few generations, the current ones are more Correct article usage
the last
college educated
and Add a hyphen
college-educated
has
specialized in specific fields. Rural Correct subject-verb agreement
have
areas
don't generally have a lot of jobs other than farming, health care and education. But in contrast
, jobs in urban areas
are a lot more diversified. This
is due to
the fact that most of the industries are concentrated towards areas
surrounding cities. This
will lead to higher population density in such
regions which will in turn opens
up a lot more supporting job opportunities like restaurants, supermarkets, public transportation etc.
Governments need to actively work to fix the concentration of Correct subject-verb agreement
open
people
in selected regions. One of the primary things they can do is to encourage big businesses to invest in rural areas
. Since most of
Change preposition
apply
the
companies pay their employees based on the cost of living of the location they are in, starting offices or factories in Correct article usage
apply
Add an article
the country
country side
would mean they need to spend less. Correct your spelling
countryside
Secondly
, local authorities could incentivize people
to stay back in underdeveloped regions. For example
, many countries give citizenship to immigrants if they agree to live and work in remote areas
.
To conclude
, human migration is a huge problem faced by many countries, but some of them are actively trying to fix it. Hopefully, by next
generation, we will see a more evenly distributed population density and wealth.Correct article usage
the next
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