Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

As the corporate world is rapidly changing and growing day by day. Some enterprises prefer that their workers dressed up with smart outfits while other entities suppose that
employer’s output
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the employers’ output
employers’ output
of work should be better than their dressings. In
this
essay, I am going to discuss both of the
views but
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views, but
I opine that in corporate environment appearance matters and have an edge over quality of work.
To begin
with, in
corporate world
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the corporate world
; Most of the staff members have to interact globally. At
this
level, when you are authorized to do conversations at
MNC level
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the MNC level
on
global platform
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a global platform
. The
first
priority is to be dressed up smartly and perfectly to put your point in the front of opposition.
For instance
, In human interaction at global level, doing
this
not only increases
respect but
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respect, but
people are more
involve
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involved
into your talks.
Secondly
, Good dressing will definitely going to put an impression on your client.
Also
, It
boost
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boosts
up
workers confidence
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the workers' confidence
workers' confidence
and their productivity will be
sky-rocketed
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skyrocketing
skyrocketed
.
For example
, If any employee is wearing a decent dress with
company’s brand name
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the company’s brand name
on it.
Then
, at the time of any presentation and conversation employee is advertising their brand which
have
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has
biggest role
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the biggest role
in convincing someone than their product.
However
, in current scenario; some employers prefer working skills over dressing skills of their employees. But the truth is MNC’s output will be benefitted by good revenue generated performance that will be
boost
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boosted
up highly if their staff members can convince others to buy their company’s products rather than internal non-profit oriented performances. To conclude, Appearance not only increases
respect but
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respect, but
it generates revenues as well and in
this
today corporate world brilliant dressing skills
is definitely have
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will definitely have
definitely have
are definitely having
have definitely had
an edge over working skills.

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